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How did you feel about the morning scene with Layla’s coat? *

Did you understand why Leo didn’t want Layla in a bright coat? *

Yes, it made sense for the secret mission

Sort of, but I wasn’t sure

No, I didn’t understand

I thought it was overreacting

I liked that she tried to figure it out herself

Which part of the woods scene was the funniest or most relatable?

Trog being clumsy

Layla peeking into trees

Leo trying to keep everyone quiet

Other

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How exciting was the kids’ walk through the woods?

Super exciting

Pretty good

Just okay

Boring

Who do you think reacted the best to the portal disappearing?

Leo

Jessie

Trog

Why was his/her reaction the best? *

What would make you want to read more?