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Chapter 5 *

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When the kids met the guard, did it feel… *

Exciting

Just ok

It could have been exciting but it ws too quick

Other

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Did Leo talking about books with the ogre make sense? *

Yes, it felt smart

Yes, It was a good distraction

Kind of, but a little weird

No, it didn’t fit

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After the scene, did you think the rules about the portal were… *

Really important

Sort of important

Not very important

The rules don’t make sense

What didn’t make sense about the rules?

Which part was the most important? *

Finding the portal

Seeing how the guard reacted

Not being able to talk about what they learned

Other

What other part was important?

Are you curious about why Samson is always hungry? *

Not really

Yes but maybe it is just ogres are always hungry

No but it is funny

Is there anything you want to tell me about the story so far?