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Chapter 6 *

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Was this chapter clear and the right length? *

Yes, it was clear and the length felt right

Yes, but it felt a little too long

Yes, but it felt too short

I like short chapters better

I wasn’t always sure what was happening

What part confused you?

When Layla joins Leo and his friends, how did you feel? *

Excited—she made things more fun

Nervous—she might cause trouble

Annoyed—she got in the way

Confused—I wasn’t sure why she came along

What did you think about Samson not being at school?

I didn’t think much of it, being absent from school is no big deal

I understood right away why he was missing

I figured it out as I read

I had my own guess

I was confused about why he was gone

What was your theory

How did the ending of the chapter make you feel?

Curious—I want to know what happens next

Satisfied—it felt like a good stopping place

Disappointed—I wanted more action

Confused—I wasn’t sure what was happening

Why was Leo your favorite in this chapter?

Why was Trog your favorite in this chapter?

Why was Jessie your favorite in this chapter?

Why was Samson’s mom your favorite in this chapter?

Why was Layla your favorite in this chapter?

Was there anything that felt boring or hard to understand?

Yes

No, it was clear

Tell me more.

What part of this chapter did you like best?